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Category 12: editorial

Judge: Betsy Rau, CMU Journalism Faculty

first place

The collegiate staff
grcc

Judge Feedback:

I AM ALLOWING THIS BECAUSE AT THE TOP IT SAYS “COLLEGIATE STAFF.” YOU CAN NOT HAVE A

BYLINE ON AN EDITORIAL. AN EDITORIAL REFLECTS THE FEELING/OPINION OF THE STAFF.

IT IS WELL RESEARCHED AND MAKES SOME EXCELLENT POINTS.

SECOND PLACE

the collegiate staff
grCC

Judge Feedback:

AS I SAID ON THE FIRST PLACE WINNER, YOU CANNOT HAVE A BYLINE OTHER THAN COLLEGIATE

STAFF. THIS WAS WELL WRITTEN BUT COULD USE MORE PROACTIVE THINGS READERS CAN DO TO

HELP.

THIRD PLACE

the lookout staff
lansing CC

Judge Feedback: YOU ARE ON THE RIGHT TRACK POSTING SUGGESTIONS FOR READERS TO MAKE A CHANGE AFTER YOU EXPRESSED OUTRAGE. A FEW MORE WOULD HAVE MADE IT STRONGER.

honorable mention

the lookout staff
lansing cc

Judge Feedback: Good background and suggestions for change. More would be great.

honorable mention

Delta collegiate staff
delta college

Judge Feedback: THIS POSES A GOOD IDEA BUT COMES CLOSE TO BEING WHINEY. YOU CAN AVOID THIS WITH MORE REASONS IT WOULD WORK, WAYS READERS CAN BE PROACTIVE AND SUGGESTIONS OF WHERE IT HAS WORKED ELSEWHERE.

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